Writing Classes

One question that consistently comes up in writing forums is “Should I take a class?” However, no one will really know if you should take a class on writing except you, but I will share with you my experience on the matter.

Over the years I have taken about 15 college classes. They included creative writing, poetry, english 101, and english 102. I took them in efforts to earn an AA degree, and creative writing and poetry just seemed like an easy class since I already did that. English 101, and 102 are required to get an AA.

While creative writing and poetry were fun to take, they really didn’t teach me anything. It was intended to teach the structure of a story/poem, how to format, and how to craft a “good” story. The problem with this type of class is that creativity is a subjective thing. If the instructor doesn’t like that type of writing he may fail you just because of style issues. Other teachers will stick to basics, like does the story have a beginning, middle and end, and does it make sense. They are grading form, rather than content. The problem with this approach is that not all stories fit the accepted form. “Dante’s Inferno” has no end, yet it is widely regarded as a classic.

English 101 teaches grammar, and how to format papers for future school work. English 102 goes deeper in-depth on how to research, write, and present a research project. Both of these classes are necessary for any degree, and useful for writing research papers. If you plan to do non-fiction, high research, or technical writing I would highly recommend you take them even if you are not planning on getting a degree.

There were actually several classes that did help me with my writing. I write fiction stories about people, so I took classes that would widen my understanding of people and what makes them tick.

Psychology, anthropology, biology, environmental sciences, history of religions, history of Russia, and history of African-Americans. From each of these classes I learned new things. How people think. How cultures evolve. How history changes cultures. How biology affects people. And even how environment affects people, and people affect environment.

These classes, classes that had absolutely nothing to do with writing, taught me more than any creative writing class ever did. Why? Because I was learning about people, places, and things that I would later be writing about, not just the format of a story.

You can get the same effect by reading non fiction, or watching documentaries. Learn something new and that knowledge will be helping you to write better.

I learned more about what makes a good story from writers workshops. In a workshop you had a lot of people reading and commenting on your work. They have no problem telling you what they do and do not like about it. They will call you out on grammar, spelling, and the content of your story. It is a great way to get good feedback and see where you need to improve.

Are You a Writer? Or an Excuse Maker?

An aspiring writer asked Nail Gaiman the following:

 “I’m shockingly lazy and find it hard to get motivated to sit in front of that computer and write. Help me!

 Neil Gaiman’s Response: “Why? You being lazy and unmotivated and not writing allows another writer, who does sit down and write, to get published in your place. Magazines and publishers only have so many pages, so many annual publishing spots. You’re letting someone else who wants to do the work get published. Surely that’s a good thing…?”

This, of course, offended a lot of people. How dare Gaiman tell people things like this! How dare he be so insensitive. Blunt even.

It reminded me, on the other hand, of a story I read a while back.

 A man who played the violin simply beautifully was doing an interview. Someone came up afterward and said “I always loved the violin. I wish I could play like that.”

 To which he responded: “No you don’t. If you did, then you’d be practicing every day, eight hours a day. You wouldn’t be wishing. You’d be doing.”

To be a truly great violinist you must practice. Learn. Practice some more. Memorize great amounts of music, and then recreate it as your own.

Really, writing, like any other art form, takes the same thing. Practice. Time. Patience. Tenasity. If you really want it you will do it. If not, then your just making excuses.

Neil Gaiman had it right. If you don’t write then someone else will. Someone else will be published, and they will have their dream while you are still wishing on a star for it to be handed to you.

“Has anyone been afraid to write their own novel?”

This was a question on Reddit not long ago. There was a lot of discussion, and some good personal stories. I thought I’d share my answer. I added some extra notes that I didn’t put on the original post.

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Yes.

About 10 years ago I got traditionally published (a few articles, some poetry, even a short story) in magazines and zines. I was suppose to get paid, but never actually did. (This was due to some confusion about foreign checks, and my bank which hadn’t ever seen one before.)

Then there was my marriage. It was falling apart around me and I wasn’t feeling confident about anything anymore.

So one part said my writing wasn’t good enough to actually get paid, and there was my marriage that made me feel like I wasn’t good enough for anything.. I ended up quitting writing for 8 years.

Every time I looked at my manuscripts during that time I would freeze up. The ideas were their, the stories were fully formed in my head, but I had been convinced that I could never possibly do it myself. I even went so far as to look into ghost writers or collaborations a few times to no avail.

In the end I had to learn to trust myself again, and my writing. After the divorce I started working on little bits here and there, trying to get myself to work more each day. It wasn’t easy.

I started showing small bits to people, and they encouraged me often. Told me how great it was. Showed me where I could improve. Gave me honest feedback and criticism.

Lets be honest. Your first draft is going to be terrible. It always is. Even Stephen King has to completely rewrite stuff now and then. But that’s what edits are for. (Note I said “edits”, not “editors”. There is a HUGE difference.)

Don’t let your subconscious take away from what you truly love. And don’t let anyone else tell you differently. The mechanics of writing can be learned. It’s the passion, and the gift of a good story, that make a true writer.

The Walking Dead

Walking Dead

The phenomenon of “Walking Dead” isn’t really surprising. They tell a damn good story. And it’s ZOMBIES! Who doesn’t love a good zombie flick?

But it isn’t the zombies that make Walking dead great. In fact, the zombies don’t always play a huge role in the story. They are an obstacle for the characters to overcome. They are a background. But they are not the true focus of the story.

The major theme in movies like “Resident Evil” and “28 Days Later” is the zombies. How did they happen? How do they escape from them? How many interesting ways can we kill them? How much blood can we show on screen?

“Walking Dead” centers around the survivors, their interactions, and their characters. How do they cope with being alone? How do they interact? Who do they turn to?

Themes of racism, adultery, survival, and family overshadow the zombies. The zombies are present, and often become tools used by the writers to pull the characters together, or push them apart, but the zombies are not the theme of the story.

“Walking Dead” showcases how a character driven story can really captivate an audience no matter what the backdrop of the story may be. They managed to take something that is usually used as a two hour show and stretch it into two seasons of some of the best TV I have seen in a while. This is, of course, my opinion, and I am partial to zombie movies, so take that with a grain of salt. However, the ratings don’t like. People love this show.

Remember this in your own writing. A great book is usually about the interaction between characters, not the sensational item. Throw in a zombie, a dragon, a wizard or a spy. If your characters don’t make us feel something (amazement, sadness, laughter, edge of our seat suspense) then we won’t care to come back and read again.

5 Sentence Fiction

“5 Sentence Fiction” is an exercise to write a short, but complete story in just five sentences. This was a challenge set out by Lillie McFerrin.
Lillie McFerrin Writes

It isn’t the easiest task. You must have a beginning, a middle and an end, all in the space of five sentences. It is a nice little exercise to get the writing flowing, and may even help with writers block. “One a day keeps the Writers Block away”?

This was my first attempt:

The lattice structure lay dormant before him, the sheath of sterile cells impregnating every surface. Stretching, moving and oxygenating the growing flesh had taken months, now it quivered in anticipation. Dr. Haverd held his breath as he sent a shock of electricity through the first man made heart. There was a blip, and he sent another shock. His elation escalated as the heart began a steady bu-dum, bu-dum, in its dish.

For some more examples there is a Reddit post about it. Feel free to drop your 5 sentences in the comments.

A Brand New Day

I realized, a short time ago, that I was writing an awful lot about the mechanics of writing. Usually it is to answer questions on various forums. Reddit seems to be the most common.

I also have this form for character creation that has been on farp for years, and has been incredibly popular.

Since I started to self publish some works, notably Twilight Tales that came out May 2012, I thought a website and/or blog would be a good way of talking to others about the thing I love: writing.

But I realized it couldn’t JUST be about writing. I’m no expert. I struggle, often, with grammar and spelling just like everyone else. I may have read a lot of books on the subject and managed to remember a lot of the mechanics of traditional publishing, and even published some things over the years. But I’m not Stephen King.

So, this blog isn’t about writing as much as it is about “what makes a good story”, and the “why” of it all, with a few how-to’s thrown in.

Maybe I’ll manage to help a few people. Maybe I’ll just be here for the fun of it. Either way, in the end I guess I win.